GREGORY FROST CRIT
Today I got a crit from Greg Frost on a short short story of mine.
My story's called "The Automatic Pen" in which a genius inventor builds a wormhole to contact aliens and seek their help with fixing another invention of his, the automatic pen.
I wrote it as a short tall tale set in the present written a la some classic American southern writers like Mark Twain and O. Henry.
My experiment didn't appeal to Greg Frost.
Nichevo.
It was good practice, though.
To paraphrase someone whose name I forget: "One has to dare to be bad."
Now that you have these critiques of your story, what do you plan to do with it? Because I would much enjoy reading it if I could.
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Hi there,
ReplyDeleteThanks for asking about the story.
It has bugs as is. If I play with it some more, I'll have to make a lot of changes.
I'll see how I feel about it down the road.
Boris