Monday, July 09, 2007

Day 2


Got up early, critted 3 stories, got some toast with jam, and showed up for an 11 A lecture on plot.

Connie and Walter brought up some good plot structures, many of which I'd heard elsewhere. The talk lasted for maybe 40-50 minutes. We then critted the 3 stories, with 5 minute breaks in between and a 15 minute lunch.

We wrapped up around 4 P. The people in the group offered the best comments they could, pointing out bugs and offering suggestions. Walter & Connie capped each round, each talking at length. The three writers seemed to come away satisfied. No one left crying.

I'm coming up tomorrow. I'll be curious to see how the session goes.

I'm getting used to the...unique layout of my half of the room I'm staying in: a bathroom light that has to be flipped down to turn on, a light switch by my faucet that turns on nothing I can see, a light down the hallway that turns on the faucet light, etc.

I just got a key for my room, but the TV in my half has no antenna or satellite box--not that I have time for it any way.

I did some active stuff to get my endorphins going, then chowed down on burned lasagna, rock hard garlic bread, and salad. I indulged in a little ice cream and soft drink, but I'll cut it out now.

Connie showed us excerpts of "Throw Momma From The Train," pointing out all the (slightly) exaggerated writer bits.

Now I have to crit 3 of 4 stories. The fourth's mine, so I'm off the hook there.

Later.

Sunday, July 08, 2007

Day 1

Thanks to procrastinating till the last minute on my packing, I got a whole 4 hours of sleep before going to the airport and getting on my flight to Albuquerque.

I dozed a bit here and there, read a novel, and ate a sandwich every four hours though I didn't want to.

Pretty warm when I got into Albuquerque, but it's a dry heat. My bag turned up at the airport ahead of me. That's a first for me. I noticed when I saw it by a baggage office rather than at the baggage claim terminal, where I waited for ten minutes and saw other people from my flight collect their stuff and leave.

I then boarded a shuttle van to Taos, New Mexico, and ended up being the last of 7 people dropped off because the Snow Bear Inn was the furthest drop off point. :-/

I did get to talking with the other passengers, one of whom was attending a mainstream fiction workshop in a motel in town. Caroline Chung-Wipff. We exchanged e-mails and promised to exchange short stories. I'm looking forward to reading her tale about... two Korean orphans caught up in the Korean War, if I recall correctly. I'll send her my Richard Takashima tale I'm prepping for WOTF after getting comments from Critters and Taos.

Anyhoo, after about 3 hours, I finally got to the Snow Bear Inn. The temperature fell something like 20 degrees fahrenheit. Bracing, a bit like the Rockies in Colorado. I can imagine what this place would be like with snow...

I found my room, chatted with Walter, Connie Willis, and some other people, and ate more food.

We have three presubmitted to stories to critique for tomorrow. I'm going to crash, then write up my thoughts in the morning. Fotunately, I'd already read all the manuscripts before coming. I just have to refresh myself on each one as I get to it.

I'm curious to see what Walter and Connie have to share with us.

Hailing frequencies closed.

Saturday, July 07, 2007

Sit Rep

Busy, busy, busy...

On the 4th of July, I managed to see: "Ratatouille," "Live Free or Die Hard," and "Transformers." Quickly, I'd say for each in order: "another cartoon classic," "better than I expected," and "glitzy pop corn fare." I don't know if or when I'll get a chance to write something more extensive about any of these, though.

I've completed the 5th week of a six week film production course. Big expense considering I was already going to Taos. I'm not complaining too much, though, since learning how to create one's own production company is handy. :-)

The class is offered by the ESE Workshops program. Two very knowledgeable producers/instructors are teaching it, Rona Edwards and Monika Skerbelis. I'd met Rona at an industry panel in LA last August, which helped prompt me to try her online course after she started it up.

I was able to get the Week 5 work done on Thursday after getting the assignments this Wednesday. Big contrast after spending something like 96 hours over the last week on my Week 4 assignments when I wasn't working and reading stories for my upcoming Taos workshop.

I wrote phone pitches for 5 scripts (though I needed to do only two).

Then for the two required scripts, I had to research for each 6 candidates for writers, directors, actors for two roles, all their reps, and prospective production companies/studios to submit to, their contact info, the list it all out.

Gods...

But I persevered and turned in my lists on Wednesday. And now I have a game plan for when I start marketing these scripts. :-)

This Saturday, I have to help out a bit at work, do some final chores, and pack.

I can hardly wait to go to Taos this Sunday. Assuming the wi-fi holds up, I expect to keep a daily blog of my Taos adventures from 7/8 to 7/21. So stay tuned.

Though I hope things don't fall apart on the homestead when I take my leave...

Wednesday, June 27, 2007

Trek XI Script Is Done

Sy Fy Portal has recently reported that the writing duo of Alex Kurtzman and Roberto Orchi have finished the Trek XI script. This film will dramatize Kirk's earliest missions.

Those who've read my other posts on this subject are aware that I feel it's a mistake to reinvent Kirk and the rest of the original series gang rather than to press ahead with new characters in a new century.

Also, I'm skeptical of director JJ Abrams. When I review his work to date, he starts out with some interesting premises, then jumps to another project rather than stays to develop what he started and take it to another level.

Alias fizzled after the first two seasons and I feel that Lost is losing it. Six Degrees and What About Brian both got cancelled.

And if this one Trek film turns out to be half-way decent, what will Paramount do with the franchise? Rehash Kirk's adventures?

IMHO, Star Trek, unlike Batman, James Bond and other franchises is about the future, which offers a wider tapestry for stories than franchises, which are set in the present.

I'll be curious to see how the films turns out when it's released in Christmas 2008.
Battlestar Galactica Tidbits

Sy Fy Portal recently reported on how actor Michael Hogan is unhappy with the decision of the Galactica producers to turn him and other characters in the Final Five. The Cylon gods.

I share Hogan's view of the direction his character was taken.

I feel that the device of revealing people to be cylons on the show has been over and misused.

That stemmed in part from the writing staff's inability to generate enough dramatic episodes in Season 3 because they had only the humans of the Colonial fleet and the cylons to work with. The ratings in the second half of the third season dropped with the filler episodes.

If aliens were introduced, actor James Olmos (Admiral Adama) would leave.

To work around this, I feel that the Colonial fleet could run into other humans over the course of their quest for Earth. That's a device the original series used with great success in its second season--before it got axed for being too expensive to produce.

I'd love to see what happen if the democratic Colonials, who were searching for another clue to Earth's location, were to wander into a sector of space controlled by an advanced human totalitarian empire that wanted to enslave them.

We'll never know since the fourth season will be the last, and I don't believe that the show's producers will go that route.

Nichevo.

Monday, June 18, 2007

Larry Hodges Critique

This past weekend, I got a critique on my "The Way of the Peacemaker" opus from an emerging fantasy writer, Larry Hodges. Someone whom I met by chance on Critters in 2005 and have had the fortune of dealing with. He's had several short stories published and is working on his first novel. I'm looking forward to seeing what he turns out down the road.

Anywho, Larry pointed out some strengths and bugs that helped me fine tune the story for Critters and Taos before I shoot it off to WOTF. A few small changes, and it's so much better. I feel really good about this draft.

Thanks Larry!
Sit Rep

Let's see...

I've recently finished writing the latest draft of my "The Way of the Peacemaker" short SF story for WOTF.

Woohoo!

It's 7900 words. I feel pretty good about this draft. I've sent it to Critters for critiquing and to Walter Jon Williams as the first story of mine to be read at my upcoming Taos workshop.

I'd also received a summons to report for jury selection on 7-13-07 for possible jury duty during the week of 7-16-07. Thing is the Taos workshop runs from 7-8-07 to 7-21-07.

So I faxed a letter explaining my situation and got in touch with the judge's clerk this morning. I've been rescheduled for either September or October.

Huzzah!

And I'm also coming up on the 3rd week of a 6 week course on how to create my own film production company. Very illuminating.

It's fun to see how one can begin to assemble the pieces of one's own fiction/film corporate entity devoted to one's own material.

Time to go back to the grind now.

Saturday, May 26, 2007

Not Seeing "Pirates of the Caribbean 3"

Coming into the Memorial Day weekend, I was planning on seeing "Pirates of the Caribbean 3: At World's End."

But I'd been hearing some bad buzz about the latest Cap'n Jack Sparrow adventure. And a nonwriter friend of a nonwriter acquaintance who stayed up late to see the film on Thursday night said it was "stupid."

IMHO, Hollywood has entered a phase where story quality is even less imortant than in the past, while squeezing as much money as possible out of a film franchise has become an even higher priority. I believe that when a story is well done, other things, like box office success will come as a consequence.

Disney and the other studios seem to believe that all they need to do nowadays is slap together some special effects, a fast-paced music score, action set pieces galore, offer it to the masses who're starving for entertainment, then sit back and rake in the dough.

I for one want to save my $$$ and time. I've got DVDs of "Heroes," some other good TV shows, and any number of good films I can watch over the weekend--when I'm not working, writing, doing chores, etc.

I know millions of people in the US and around the world will flock to theatres and set new box office records (till the next big blockbuster gets released).

It'd be interesting to see what'd happen if the masses didn't see POTC 3 and other blockbuster flops. I'd imagine that the studios would start caring more about the quality of the films they're greenlighting then.

Wednesday, May 23, 2007

Sit Rep

I've been busy...

I'm working on the latest draft of my space opera SF short story for WOTF. I spent about two weeks writing out the first draft of the current version by hand, now I'm typing it out (and making changes).

I'm up to page 15 and 2575 words. Feeling very hopeful.

I've also gotten my reading orders from Walter Jon Williams and Connie Willis to read the Turkey City lexicon for workshops and a bunch of short stories and 1 novella.

Here's the list:

"Nova," by Samuel R. Delany.

"Flowers for Algernon" (the original novelet, not the novel) in:
THE HUGO WINNERS, ed. Isaac Asimov
BEST SF 4, ed. Edmund Crispin
BEST FROM F AND SF 9, ed. Robert P. Mills
5TH ANNUAL OF THE YEAR'S BEST SF, ed. Judith Merril
THE MAGAZINE OF F AND SF: A THIRTY-YEAR PERSPECTIVE, ed.Ed Ferman
TEN TOP STORIES, ed. D.A. Sohn
SF HALL OF FAME, ed. Robert Silverberg (got this one)

"The Light of Other Days," by Bob Shaw.

"Lot," by Ward Moore in MY FAVORITE SCIENCE FICTION STORY,
edited by Martin H. Greenberg

BEST FROM F AND SF 3, ed. Anthony Boucher and J. Francis McComas
LOT AND LOT'S DAUGHTER with a new intro by Michael Swanwick

"Light of Days" was available free online. I bought the rest off of Amazon when a search of my local library coop turned up nada.

I paid $1.48 for 4 books with $3.99 postage for each. Bloody postal increases.

Anyhow, I'm looking forward to reading. On top of my other stuff, my story, work...

Ugh...

Looking forward to "Pirates of the Caribbean: At World's End" this weekend.

I guess.

I expect to review that.

Hailing frequencies closed.

Wednesday, May 16, 2007

Laurie Hutzler Script Consultation

I just came off a consult with Laurie Hutzler on my Stars and Stripes script.

It was already good, but with the changes (so small yet so poignant) I have in mind, it'll be much, much better. There was an issue of making the protagonist more layered, which she helped me work out as we talked. Awesome process.

I'll look forward to sharpening the script, probably next winter since I have some fiction and film stories in the hopper to work on first.

The burdens a writer bears... :-)

I hope this script and my Chinese Joan of Arc tale will still do well in this year's contests, though. I'll see.

Sunday, May 06, 2007

Review: Spiderman 3

More is less.

Speaking for myself, I thought the first Spiderman was OK. The second installment hit it out of the park. No question.

I feel that Spiderman 2 raised the bar so high that director Sam Raimi overreached himself and tried to tell a grand story by mixing in too many subplots and characters competing with each other for screen time. He substituted scope and scale for the warmth and wit that made those two previous pictures so memorable. This lumbering third installment finds a trio of villains jockeying for screen time amid several half-developed storylines and a darker, self-serious tone that veers into the overwrought.

The opening credit sequence does a beautiful job of showing highlights from the previous two movies and gets you ready for this one, which is set an indeterminate amount of time after the 2nd one. Peter Parker (Tobey Maguire) is living his dream life - he and Mary Jane (Kirsten Dunst) are going strong, he's at the top of his college classes, and much to the consternation of the Daily Bugle’s J. Jonah Jameson (J.K. Simmons), Spidey’s become New York’s favorite celebrity. What could go wrong?

For starters all of this success starts to go to our favorite webslinger’s head. He becomes self-involved and doesn’t notice MJ's problems whose life is starting to go downhill after she gets fired from her Broadway show. To be fair, she doesn’t tell Peter anything. (One must ask why the critics hate her in the third film when she was loved in the second and was good enough to get hired in the first place?) Anywho, MJ gets jealous of Peter's platonic relationship with his colorless lab partner Gwen Stacy (Bryce Dallas Howard) when she gives Spidey the key to the city and gives him "their" kiss while he’s hanging upside down.

It’s a bad time to grow an ego, as there’s trouble brewing on several fronts. First, Peter’s former best friend Harry Osborn (James Franco) has discovered his late father’s stash of Green Goblin super-soldier serum, and he’s suiting up for second-generation supervillian-hood with a personal vendetta against Spider-Man.

And speaking of personal vendettas, it turns out the man who murdered Peter’s beloved Uncle Ben wasn’t actually the guy we saw Spidey take out in the first film. In a strange little chunk of revisionist history, we see a bunch of reshot scenes illustrating that Flint Marko (Thomas Haden Church) was the trigger man. As if all this weren’t awkward enough, James Cromwell’s police captain calls Parker and Aunt May down to the station and explains it to them for no obvious reason.

The punchline isn’t only that Church just escaped from prison, but he also accidentally tripped and fell into a top secret science experiment out of Star Trek that, for some reason, was being carried out in the middle of the night—so suddenly he’s the Sandman.

Still not enough story points for you? Well there’s also the matter of this strange alien goo coming from a meteorite that lands conveniently close to the spot where Peter and MJ are stargazing in New York’s Central Park. The goo then attaches itself to Peter’s moped and hangs around inertly in his room for the first 2/3 of the film before attaching itself to Peter and spontaneously transforming into a shiny black costume. It’s a parasitic organism that makes Spidey a lot more aggressive, and causes Pete to grow his bangs out like he’s in an ’80s New Wave band and sway like he’s on Saturday Night Fever.

Then there’s Eddie Brock (Topher Grace), a competitive freelance photographer, who’s trying to muscle his way into Parker’s gig at the Daily Bugle by Photoshopping forgeries of Spider-Man committing robberies so the people of New York will turn on their hero. And that’s before Brock gets up close and personal with the alien goo.

Whew! Raimi—who co-wrote the script with his brother Ivan as well as two-time Oscar winner Alvin Sargent ("Julia," "Ordinary People")-figures out a way to line up these events (sort of). For example, during the early fight between Spidey and Harry (the best action set piece of the film), Harry hits his head and comes down with short-term amnesia, so that he spends most of the movie being an amnesiac pussycat who’s nothing but sunshine and light. MJ hangs out with him for a bit to find some comfort from all her problems. Then Spidey figures out a way to stop the Sandman, but only for a little while. During these rest periods, Peter/Spidey can then deal with other problems.

On the bad side, the problems seem more artificial in Spider-Man 3 than they did in Spiderman 2. Each problem has less breathing room, less time to become organic with gray areas in the middle. The film eventually gets so tangled and top-heavy with its 20 million different plot threads, Raimi has to resort to Peter Parker watching television so news crews can helpfully recap at least an hour’s worth of off-screen events that set the final battle in motion. (Note to aspiring screenwriters: If your superhero needs to watch CNN in order to figure out what’s going on in his own movie, take it as a sign you’ve written yourself into a corner.)

There's the Raimi touch of having (Bruce Campbell) make another appearance, this time as a pseudo French MaĆ®tre d' and the expected Stan Lee cameo (I'm not against him getting his due, but his cameos don’t seem to be adding anything). Then there's the typical moment where Spiderman does something in front of the cheering NYC crowd. Rather than get out of the way, the New Yorkers stand there and watch the battles when buildings and debris are falling around them. What would it be like to have Spidey fight ONE villain WITHOUT removing his mask in the middle of the brawl? It's amazing everyone in NYC doesn't know who he is by now.

McGuire seems to be a bit bored this go around. There's no spark or excitement in his performance except when he gets taken over by the alien goo and goes dark side—for Peter. He struts down the street dressed in black, accompanied by cheesy music, and women either give him the eye or look at him like he's a creep, goes to jazz clubs, and says "babe" a lot. Hilarious sequence.

Then there's the idea of bringing in the iconic Gwen Stacy, who many fans of the Spiderman comic book knows has a major impact on our hero's life. The problem is, Stacy's impact is felt early on in his career and introducing her into the film world this way and at this time makes absolutely no sense. If they wanted to introduce a woman to make MJ jealous then this character would have been fine, as long as she was called something other than Gwen Stacy.

I liked the Sandman character and the resolution at the end better than I thought I would, but I also hated the revisionist way they turned Sandman into the killer of Uncle Ben. The storyline was handled well, but it felt too much like the Batman origin story where they had to make the hero invested by saying "Hey, I killed your Uncle."

The stuff with Harry was actually very good. Here James Franco really gets to display a real emotional range. The new Goblin designs were real cool (in an edgy bad guy sort of way), everything from the black leather suit, to the mask, to the redesigned Goblin glider were fantastic. I had the feeling this was a guy who could kick Spidey's butt (and should have been the main baddie for the film). The main reason the 3rd film works is because of him.

As good as everything with the Goblin and the Sandman were, much about Venom was terrible. The way he moved in his liquid form, conveniently sat around inert in Peter’s room, to how he looked once it bonded with Brock. I like the cartoon Venom, but the film version got shortchanged and deserved its own movie. Why couldn’t Venom have been brought in for Spiderman 4? The studio will produce it after all, whether or not the original team stays on board. He's one bad guy too many. His introduction into the story causes everything to be crowded, rushed, and overlong. Spider-Man 3 feels like it should end around the 1:40 mark, but like the Energizer Bunny, it keeps going...

The CGI in this takes a step back to the cartoony animation that was in the first film, Spiderman swinging around town looked like a tiny animated spec. The stuff with the Sandman was about as good as it could be. Focusing on the grains of sand and then expanding to see him reassemble after the experiment—very lyrical.

Considering how overloaded the film is, Raimi does juggle the characters and storylines fairly well. People will line up to watch the film and set new opening weekend box office records. But everything is just a little off, or takes a step back. The ending was touching, but I’m stumped on where Peter and MJ are headed now. People love trilogies because it's said that good things come in threes, but this series would have looked better and felt more satisfying had the filmmakers stopped at two.

Saturday, April 28, 2007

Laurie Hutzler Script Consultation/Possible 1st Film Break?

Today I had a phone consult with Laurie Hutzler, the sixth I've had in about 3 years, the first I've had since starting this blog.

It was top notch as usual.

Laurie went over my Chinese Joan of Arc epic "Heaven's Mandate" and my rom com "Twice In A Lifetime."

I'll be restructuring both fairly heavily and taking them up another notch. I expect to get back to those next year, though, since I'm currently working on fiction and have other scripts to work on after that.

Laurie also mentioned that she knows someone who is starting up a production company in China and would be a likely person to send the rewrite of "Heaven's Mandate" to--provided it's up to par. She also knows someone who could help me translate the script to Chinese. :-)

When this script is ready, hopefully "Crouching Tiger" director Ang Lee will get attached and "Crouching Tiger" heroine Zhang Ziyi will be signed to played the heroine. :-)

I'll also look forward to sending my rom com out when it's ready.

I get the feeling something good started today.

Thanks Laurie!

Sunday, April 15, 2007

Retro Review: "BATMAN BEGINS"

Hey all,

I recently rented the "Batman Begins" DVD from my local Blockbuster since I'd been meaning to and I don't care for the current theater offerings.

I liked "Batman Begins" when it first came out and it's only deepened since, which is nice because it's more common for me to not like something on DVD/VHS after seeing it in theatres.

IMHO, Director Christopher Nolan has hit it out of the park. Being a genius of mystery and intrigue (MEMENTO, FOLLOWING, INSOMNIA), it shouldn't be that surprising. For those who haven't seen MEMENTO, a unique, yet brain-straining feature; suffice to say that Nolan is great with thought and suspense -- but action? What an exciting risk to employ. Personally, I think these risks pay off in spades. This is a film that cares a great deal for what is going on inside the Bat-Man's head; the action is more of an accent.

Director Nolan did a fantastic job of directing this, all of the performances are top notch, the pacing is smooth as silk, and the atmosphere is right on target. If I had one complaint it would be that he plays it almost too safe, there isn't a single memorable shot in this film or a moment where you go "WOW!!!" or "COOL!" and the
action sequences were too pedestrian.

The fight scenes are shot close in; Nolan seems to have made a conscious decision not to compete with other more "martial arts" hand-to-hand action flicks. His action scenes are dark, the sounds and movement jeer a chill or more accurately -- fear.

Co-written with David S. Goyer (scribe of the mostly dismal BLADE trilogy), "Batman Begins" is anything but cartoony, this new film is serious, real, and most of all BELIEVABLE.

Never once do you not believe that this world exists, that Bruce Wayne (Christian Bale) is not a real person, that the young Lt. James Gordon (Gary Oldman) isn't honest, that Rachel Dawes (Katie Holmes) isn't an idealistic, earnest Assistant District Attorney. The cast in this film all did an amazing job. They understood the material, and took it seriously -- the way it's meant to be.

Nolan's approach is born out in the title, taking Bruce Wayne back to his childhood before guiding him into the formation of his double identity. The film still resides in a nether world, one stuck in a comic book sensibility yet real enough to gain and hold viewer interest.

Nolan breaks the first part of his film into several story segments, as he relates Bruce Wayne's childhood, his eventual alienation and withdrawal from society, and his reclamation as a noble warrior and crime-fighting crusader. By using this framework, Nolan not only can draw an in-depth portrait of a troubled man confronting his fears, but he can also underline what the film is about, that is, Batman's origins and eventual transformation.

As a result, the film witnesses the evolution of Batman's costume, cape, car, cave, and more, all smoothly integrated into the story without calling undue attention. Nolan makes it fun, and darn interesting, to watch how everything comes together to make this new creature.

This early part also sets up Batman's eventual battles against Henri Ducard (Liam Neeson), Wayne's early mentor who rescues him from an Asian jail and starts him on his warrior training in a league of shadowy ninjas, who fight evil-doers by being avenging angels.

Nesson, who has played the wise mentor figure several times in recent years, gives Wayne several great tips like: "Always be aware of your surroundings" and "To conquer your fear, you must become fear."

When Ducard and Batman end up enemies, it sets up the later, big battle scenes back in Gotham.

Everything shifts from Bruce Wayne's childhood and his eventual Asian travels to his return to Gotham, his exposure to the growing crime problem, and his integration into society as well as his father's corporate world. Nolan relies heavily on computer-generated effects for this second part, delivering a doomed vision of a dark city, populated by unemployment, corporate crime, corrupt police, crime
lords, and, of course, bats.

In the final part, doomsday arrives, as various forces conspire to overtake the city with only Batman and perky assistant district attorney Rachel Dawes to thwart them. This apocalypse befits the film's comic book origins, looking artificial but nevertheless harrowing.

Nolan's mood-setting with terminally ominous atmospherics are greatly aided by the often thunderous music score, supplied by two of Hollywood's most noted craftsmen, James Newton Howard and Hans Zimmer. In listening to the highly complementary score, it's fun to try and pick out which composer did which scenes.

The nice thing about this film, is that it actually gives us a look at Bruce Wayne's parents. When they die we actually care, because we get to know these people. Bruce's relationship with Rachel is complicated, she was their maid's daughter and they were close friends as children, but grew apart after the death of his parents.
She becomes a crusading Assistant DA and doesn't like the fact that Bruce doesn't seem to care about the world around him.

Since he's not too well known to general movie audiences, Christian Bale works out passably well as the latest Batman, despite his near total lack of emotion and over-fondness for whispering for effect. The superb supporting cast adds strength to what could have been throwaway roles. Rutger Hauer, Gary Oldman, Ken Watanabe, Linus Roache and Morgan Freeman inject believability if not prestige into their parts. Michael Caine plays dedicated servant Alfred with just the right amount of whimsy but never indicates he's doing anything but taking it all seriously. Katie Holmes was passable, but she won't be missed in the upcoming DARK KNIGHT. I can hardly wait to see who'll be the new Rachel.

In my lights, Nolan has breathed new life into the Batman franchise, which the last couple of flicks did their best to beat down into campy mindlessness. Here's hoping Nolan keeps the magic with the DARK KNIGHT, which is due out on July 18, 2008.

Saturday, April 14, 2007

Kurt Vonnegut

On April 11, 2007, SF novel giant Kurt Vonnegut passed away from head injuries sustained in a fall.

Vonnegut, who fought in WW II, survived a German POW camp, and witnessed the Allied atrocity of the firebombing of Dresden, led a varied life to say the least.

Those experiences informed his fiction, which made him the center of the counter culture movement in the '60s and '70s.

His SF/F satires of the failings in American society bit deep and resonated with his readers. All who write should aspire to follow his example. I know I am.

Vonnegut inspired a number of storytellers in fiction, TV, and film.

When I learned this, I realized I'd been influenced by some of them. So in a way I've been touched by him.

I haven't read his stories yet, but I'm adding them to my reading list.
Taos Toolbox

Today, I got an invite from SF fiction giant Walter Jon Williams to attend his SF/F workshop in New Mexico this July.

WOOHOO!!!

Saying I'm psyched doesn't begin to cover things.

I can hardly wait to learn at the feet of another master. This is the workshop's first year. It might also be the last since Williams told me that he's not certain he'll offer it again. So I'm really lucky to have gotten in when I did. =)

I think I'll keep a daily record of this when the time comes.

Now I just have to find the money...

Tuesday, April 10, 2007

Client/Agent-Networking questions with a Novel Consultant

Here's the transcript of the Q and A event I had organized under the auspices of WeHo in which novel consultant Michele Wallenstein kindly fielded questions on networking in the film industry and the Agent/Client relationship.

Good thing is Michele answered my questions. Thanks a million!

Bad thing was no one else offered questions though the event was promoted and I'd sent messages out to people both on WeHo and off.

C'est le vie...

or Nichevo if I were Russian.

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Client/Agent Question

Hi Michele,

I hear that nowadays, it's recommended that a screenwriter obtain three reps:

1. a manager to provide career guidance
2. an agent to help submit scripts to producers/studios,
3. an entertainment attorney to help negotiate contracts.

If a screenwriter were to obtain an agent from a boutique agency that gives more attention to its clients than an agent from a huge packaging agency like CAA, ICM, and William Morris where writers aren't so valued, will the boutique agent serve the functions of 1 & 2?

Thanks!

Boris

Client/Agent Answer

Q: I hear that nowadays, it's recommended that a screenwriter obtain three reps:

1. a manager to provide career guidance
2. an agent to help submit scripts to producers/studios,
3. an entertainment attorney to help negotiate contracts.

If a screenwriter were to obtain an agent from a boutique agency that gives more attention to its clients than an agent from a huge packaging agency like CAA, ICM, and William Morris where writers aren't so valued, will the boutique agent serve the functions of 1 & 2?

A: Timing is everything. When a writer is just starting out and perhaps has interest in one script, all that's needed is an experienced agent.

Having a manager and attorney may be helpful when one is building a successful career with a few "credits" in one's work history.

The boutique agencies are quite well equipped to handle most aspects of a writer's career. They will know where to submit your material. They will know how to guide your career and/or project. They will know how to negotiate a deal and review a simple contract. In the event that you are lucky enough to have a very complicated deal, then the agent should help you to bring in an attorney to help close the deal and review the paperwork.

If you have an agent that is passionate about your work, you probably won't need anyone else. This is a strong statement, but one that I know to be true.

Moving from a small agency, that believes in you and gets your material read, to a large agency is almost always a mistake. I have never seen a writer's life improve by such a move. Invariably their careers sink into little or nothing.

Michele


Networking Question

Hi Michele,

Since the internet is more pervasive nowadays than it was 10-15 years ago, how well can it serve to help screenwriters living outside of Los Angeles (assuming they have marketable scripts that studios want) to network with major industry players?

Thanks again.

Boris

Networking Answer

Q: "Since the internet is more pervasive nowadays than it was 10-15 years ago, how well can it serve to help screenwriters living outside of Los Angeles (assuming they have marketable scripts that studios want) to network with major industry players?"

A: The absolute best networking is done face to face. Anything that makes working together easier is what one must strive for. Clearly, it is better to have a personal relationship, than a distant one.

That said, if the distance cannot be closed, than one has no other choices but to use telephones and internet.

Hollywood is not simply a state of mind. It is, indeed, a place. It is where the action is and where the buyers are situated. If you are lucky enough to have a "marketable script that the studios want," then it is imperative that you try to move heaven and earth to move to Los Angeles immediately. The expression "out of sight, out of mind" is quite realistic.

You wouldn't expect to work on the Alaskan pipeline while living in Detroit.

Michele
Sit Rep

Freedom...

That feels so good...

I've just stepped down as manager of the WeHo (West Hollywood) Online Screenwriters Group like I'd been thinking I would. Except it's taken me a lot longer than I expected since I tried to give WeHo the benefit of the doubt and didn't want to do any thing hasty and irreversible.

I joined WeHo in November 2006 when it was started and became its manager in December 2006 when the owner got too busy to keep it going.

I encouraged discussion on the craft and business of screenwriting organized seven consecutive group script reads, offered a 1st draft online screenwriting workshop, a rewrite class, and a Q&A event with novel consultant Michele Wallenstein.

Unfortunately, WeHo members didn't post much, leaving me to be the single largest poster than everyone else combined. The script reads got progressively fewer critiques as time went by. People either backed out of the 1st draft workshop or didn't respond to my offer. I didn't have the energy to run the rewrite class. And no one except me asked Michele questions about networking in the film industry and the Agent/Client relationship.

The non Q&A event turned out to be the last straw; hence my bidding farewell to WeHo.

I can imagine the reaction of the WeHo members when they wake up and realize I'm gone.

My goal is to sell my fiction/film stories and be produced, not run a comatose writers site.

Now I'm free to concentrate on me.

Free...

What a sweet word.

I did manage to finish work on my rom com "Twice In A Lifetime" in which a widowed man finds love a second time, but with an engaged woman.

I'll have that consulted on, along with my Chinese Joan of Arc tale and my American "Master and Commander" epic. I'm also moving ahead with entering the Nichols and Austin contests with at least two scripts this year.

I also plan on taking a course on creating my own production company either this summer or later.

Right now, I'm eking out the newest draft of my "The Way of the Peacemaker" short fiction story for the Writers of the Future Contest. It's like pulling teeth to write 500 words in 4 hours.

Ugh...

But at least I'm on the right track with this draft. Penning the pilot story for one prospective series I have in mind to be the next thing after Star Wars and Star Trek is no easy feat it seems.

I'm still gonna do it.

And without WeHo weighing me down.

Woohoo!

Thursday, March 22, 2007

BSG Season 4 Extended to 22 Episodes--and Cancelled?

On March 21, 2007, SyFy Portal reported that SciFi Channel extended its order for BattleStar Galactica's (BSG) 4th season from 13 to 22 episodes.

Normally, this would be a good thing--except a "source" close to SciFi says the extra episodes are for letting Ron Moore and his brain trust wrap up the series.

Can't say I'm surprised. Ratings have been low during BSG's third season even though the show is critically acclaimed and won the Peabody award for an awesome second season.

This season, the main storyline of finding Earth has been sidelined, especially during the second half.

Several weeks have been devoted to filler episodes on secondary characters with Earth still as far away as ever and no contacts with the Cylons.

IMHO, this is due in part to the limited number of story arcs available within the Colonial fleet without outside elements brought in, like the Battlestar Pegasus in the second season (some of the best TV ever produced).

The producers/writers are hampered in part by the fact that they can't bring in bumpy-headed aliens without actor James Olmos (Admiral Adama) leaving the show.

To sidestep this, I feel that the Colonial Fleet can come across settlements of humans left behind by the 13th tribe on its trek to Earth. This is a device used with great success by Glenn Larson on the original series. These humans can possess markers which help point the way to Earth for the Colonials--after putting them through hell, of course.

I for one would like to see what'd happen if the fleet comes across a Class-M world populated by a technologically advanced society, which can hold off the Cylons, only it's not our Earth.

Or what would happen if the democratic Colonials ran into a sector of space controlled by a space-faring totalitarian human society that wanted to enslave them?

It also didn't help that the show became a soap opera rather than a drama when the producers decided to start up a romantic triangle between the characters Apollo, Starbuck, and Dualla. The triangle became increasingly unpopular among fans as Season 3 went on. And Starbuck was taken on a character journey that made her increasingly dysfunctional with no rhyme or reason.

If BSG ends in the fourth season, Moore and company have themselves to blame for running out of ideas and feeding their audience lackluster filler episodes and unsatisfying character developments.

I kinda half-wish I'd asked about intern spots when I attended a writers meeting where BSG writer/producers David Weddle and Bradley Thompson talked about their show. It was fun spitballing with 'em about BSG and DS9.

But I made the decision to focus on fiction and film, and I'm content. Really. I am. :-)

Sunday, March 11, 2007

Review: "300"

I had a sneaking suspicion the new film "300" wouldn’t work for me, but since I had this blasted itch to see something new (despite ever rising theater prices) I took the plunge.

Unfortunately, my feelings were dead on.

Movies like "Letters From Iwo Jima" reflect the contemporary belief that any war movie worth its salt must capture the horror of armed combat.

"300," on the other hand, believes it's enough to capture the fun of watching a war movie on a weekend afternoon. Set to stylized action and crunching guitar riffs, the film is cartoonish and as subtle as a spear thrust to the head.

Based on the well-received comic book miniseries from "Sin City" creator Frank Miller, this would-be historical epic is loaded with wall-to-wall graphic violence and gore (swordfire, arrowfire, slashings, stabbings, beheadings, creature attacks and explosive mayhem), male and female nudity, simulated sex and some sexual violence, and some sexually suggestive talk and humor. It’s a faithful-to-a-fault adaptation that recreates specific panels from the comic. How this R rated film avoids NC-17 is anyone’s guess. A thin plot, puffed up dialogue, and underdeveloped characters do nothing to leaven the film’s long battle scenes. The fighting makes up almost half the film’s 144 minutes.

The film is based on the Battle of Thermopylae, where 300 Spartan warriors died almost to the last man to delay an invading Persian army of millions (these events also inspired a 1962 movie version, "The 300 Spartans").

Scottish actor Gerard Butler ("Phantom of the Opera") stars here as Leonidas, the king who led the Spartan defense. In this version of events, his numbers were reduced because Sparta’s ephors, sacred priests, and key politicians taking Persian gold declared a sacred holiday to hamstring the army from mobilizing. So with hand-picked troops serving as his personal guard, Leonidas takes a "stroll" to northern Greece. There he joins with fearful Greek allies to block key mountain paths and funnel the Persians into a narrow pass dubbed the "Hot Gates," where the defenders can face a few hundred by dribs and drabs.

The Persian king Xerxes (Rodrigo Santoro, Brazil’s "Tom Cruise" cum "Lost" TV actor) sends wave after wave of soldiers at the determined Spartans. Leonidas and his comrades slaughter thousands, but can't hold the line forever. Back home, Queen Gorgo (Lena Headey) hopes to rally the full Spartan army. The duplicitous councilman Theron (an oily Dominic West) clearly implies that the price of his support is her.

But after taking payment, Theron reneges on his deal. The queen collects with interest, though, when she plunges a sword into his stomach. A handy purse loaded with Persian Darics, or gold coins, then spills to the ground, exposing Persian duplicity in the Spartans’ midst. By this time, it’s too late as Leonidas and his band finally fall to Xerxes’ minions.

Unlike the earlier, sedate by comparison 1962 film, which got most of the history right, "300" obsesses with giving the Spartans credit for every Persian slain at Thermopylae. So much so it misses their true noble sacrifice, that once Xerxes outflanked them, the 300 Spartans (as well as 700 Thespian soldiers) remained on the battlefield to cover the retreat of the rest of the Greek army.

This Alamo-like sacrifice unites Greece against Persia the following year at the plain of Platea, where Dilios finishes his story of Leonidas’ stand and leads the charge against the dread Persian hordes.

Co-writer/director Zack Snyder ("Dawn of the Dead") borrows the computer-crafted look of "Sin City." The fakery makes the stupendous slaughter digestible, and the wholesale dismemberment and blood-squirting can be done digitally, with "Matrix"-style acrobatics.

The fanciful depiction of the horrific battle also allows Snyder to integrate fantasy elements - the Spartans battle a giant ogre, and there's another creature with crab-claw hands who executes ineffective generals at the whim of Xerxes, who himself looks like a seven-foot-tall Dennis Rodman after a shopping/piercing spree.

The cinematography lacks the rugged vitality, and the dynamism, of Miller's drawings, though. Miller's "300" pictures leap off the page; on the movie screen, they roll over and play dead. The film has a poreless, waxen quality, as if all sensuality had been airbrushed out of it: the Spartans glow, while the Persians gleam darkly. The actors struggle valiantly to take hold of their characters, but deep down they know they've donated their bodies, and their faces, to science.

The film owes a debt to "Gladiator" as well as the "Lord of the Rings" movies. "Rings" co-star David Wenham appears here, narrating a few segments as Dilios, a one-eyed survivor of the Spartans’ stand.

Butler's blustery performance was clearly inspired by Russell Crowe, though it has none of Crowe's subtlety.

There's something to be said for a movie that pauses amid an orgy of violence to show us an actual orgy - Xerxes' tent houses a harem of naked, squirming bisexual slave girls, a few of whom are amputees. The movie, obsessed with machismo, seems to suggest that the Persians need to be stopped because they are sexually ambiguous. Ironic since the washboard-abbed Spartans in their scarlet cloaks and brown loincloths look ready to break into a chorus of "YMCA" any second.

Clearly, this isn’t "Letters From Iwo Jima." "300" makes no bones about embracing the glory of war (or the glory of a comic strip based on a movie about a war), and romanticizing the Spartan warrior culture ("never surrender, " "never retreat," "hope for a beautiful death") that entranced Miller as a boy.

Miller chose well with Thermopylae . It’s a cinema-ready event that produced dialogue that no dramatist could improve, recorded by Herodotus and repeated here. "Come back with your shield, or on it," says Gorgo to Leonidas. When Xerxes asks the Spartans to lay down their arms, Leonidas says, "Come and get 'em." And when a Persian general brags "Our arrows will blot out the sun, " a Spartan answers "Then we will fight in the shade."

Along the way, "300" does give us a sense of why Thermopylae is considered pivotal to history. It casts the Spartans as defenders of Western civilization (freedom and self-rule and "reason") against Xerxes, a self-proclaimed man-god supported by slave armies who fought with whips at their backs. The Spartans had slaves, but did their own fighting.

Generally unknown to most people is that in the following century, the Spartans went on to establish an empire of their own—and fail miserably. A bastion of democracy and freedom indeed. Also left out is the fact that prior to the Persian invasion of Greece, Athens and Sparta had tried to incite uprisings among several of Persia’s neighboring subject peoples. Freedom to the ancient Greeks equaled freedom to aggrandize themselves. The Spartans were oligarchs, while the Athenians were democrats. Athenian democracy was for Athenians, though, not other Greeks much less foreigners.

Here's an article that goes over how well "300" matches up with history.


"300" has caused a stir in Europe, where debate has begun on whether the film is an apologia for Bush's Iraq adventure or an apologia for anti-occupation suicide missions.

I’ll go out on a limb and guess this won’t matter much to Millers' fans. They're concerned with more important things, like how to disable and defeat an ogre by first cutting his hamstring, then stabbing him in the eye and slicing him open at the neck.

Sunday, March 04, 2007

REVIEW: "LETTERS FROM IWO JIMA"

"Letters From Iwo Jima," Clint Eastwood's spare and poetic companion piece to "Flags of Our Fathers," is an engrossing and revealing look at that same World War II battle. This time it’s told from the viewpoint of the doomed Japanese soldiers who want to believe the propaganda that tells them they are destined to win because "Americans are weak-willed and inferior. ... They let their emotions interfere with their duty...."

"Letters" is the film I was hoping for from "Flags": a war narrative, expertly told, powerfully acted and filled with moments of brutal truth and savage grace.

"Flags" looked at Iwo Jima from the U.S. point of view, focusing in particular on the Marines and the Navy corpsman who became symbols of American heroism when a photographer snapped a picture of the men raising the flag atop the Iwo Jima mountain that the Japanese called (we learn in "Letters") Suribachi. The movie jumped back and forth in time, and played out somewhat like an overlong thesis paper: Eastwood tells us from the start that the film is going to critique the ways in which military action and sacrifice are spun into myth by government propagandists, so we learn little new by the time the movie ends 132 minutes later.

"Letters" avoids this problem by pretty much adhering to a linear narrative. Although the film opens in the present day with diggers on Iwo Jima uncovering a cache of Japanese letters from the war, the story quickly moves into the past, and we soon forget we are watching a sort of flashback.

As a chronicler of one of the most monumental battles in modern history, Eastwood not only has the scope of vision to show how, on a grand scale, the battle progressed for the defenders in strictly military terms, but also the little details about the Japanese soldiers themselves. A lesser director would have gone for stock heroics or brave samurais committing suicide. This is a quieter, braver film than that, preferring to focus instead on real-life people.

The script, whose Japanese dialogue is translated through subtitles, is by newcomer Iris Yamashita, with story input from one of "Flags"' screenwriters Paul Haggis ("Million Dollar Baby," "Crash," and "The Black Donnellys"). Credit is also given to the letters for home written by the Japanese soldiers who defended Iwo Jima and the personal correspondence of the commanding Japanese general Tadamichi Kuribayahi, titled "Picture Letters From Commander in Chief."

As in "Flags," we see how soldiers become unwitting fodder for their country's war effort. The flawed "Flags" tells the story of the three American men who obeyed their superior officers and willingly accepted the guise of heroic mascots in a public relations blitz to raise support for the war on the home front. "Letters" instead focuses on the 36-day battle for the island of Iwo Jima. We're confronted with images of Imperial Japanese military men who not only are expected to serve their emperor and suffer starvation, disease, and overwhelming odds in his name but also die by either their own hand or the enemy's rather than face the cultural ignominy of defeat. Again, Eastwood uses the muted color palette employed in "Flags," rendering the island's muck and caves in nearly black-and-white tones, brightened only by the flash of a gun muzzle or iconic flag.

In "Flags" we saw how the Americans were lured onto the beaches of Iwo Jima by the silence of the Japanese who were holed up in the island's mountain caves while holding their fire until the troops became sitting ducks. "Letters" takes us inside those caves, where the outnumbered Japanese soldiers--suffering from dysentery, hunger, and demoralization--still held onto their ideals of dying honorably for their country. Just a handful of men we are shown think through their objectives for themselves.

When the Americans finally appear, swarming ashore in well-armed, well-fed waves, the Japanese fight, but more out of a sense of their backs being to a wall (propaganda having told them that the Americans are not only weak and emotional soldiers, but savages who won't take them prisoner) than any airy notion of Duty or Honor.

These men could easily be stand-ins for the members of the American Confederacy. Theirs is a story of individuals fighting a losing battle valiantly, which is always romantic. And, in this case, epic.

The structure of "Letters" is fairly basic, following a mix of soldiers from different ranks as they get ready for the inevitable American invasion. It's the dead end of the war, with the Japanese Combined Fleet and air force almost entirely destroyed, and the island's garrison digging in for a desperate last stand--Iwo Jima was the first island considered actual Japanese territory to be assaulted by the Americans, and so had extra significance.

The screenplay brings to life four indelible characters, all of whom know there is little chance they'll leave the island alive. Lt. Gen. Kuribayashi (Ken Watanabe of "Last Samurai," "Batman Begins," and "Memoirs of a Geisha") is the untraditional officer, in command of Iwo Jima’s garrison. He fights with the irony that, having spent time in the United States before the war as a military attache, he reveres Americans and understands the industrial and resource mismatch Japan faces.

Saigo (Japanese pop star Kazunari Ninomiya) is an irreverent young baker who just wants to stay alive to see his newborn daughter.




The aristocratic Baron Nishi (Tsuyoshi Ihara) is a famous equestrian who competed in the 1932 Los Angeles Olympics.

Private Shimizu (Ryo Kase) was trained in the elite school for the Kempeitai, the Gestapo-style military police charged with maintaining Japan’s internal security and the people’s patriotism. But Shimizu found himself shipped off to Iwo Jima for disobeying orders to kill a dog. We see, as well, the old-guard officers who would shoot any soldier who tries to surrender, and who, when defeat seems inevitable, order their men to die with honor by blowing themselves up with grenades. Eastwood's depiction of the horrors of war--and the atrocities committed on both sides--has a shocking intimacy.

At Iwo Jima--where, presumably, the stars of "Flags" are elsewhere storming the beaches--a cross section of post-feudal, pre-modern Japanese society mounts a defense of the volcanic island (of black sand and no charm), which is considered part of the Japanese homeland. The dichotomous relationship between the officer class and the enlisted men in the Japanese force is one of the more poignant aspects of "Letters."

Some like General Tadamichi and Baron Nishi, who live the imperial tradition of bushido as an honorable birthright. Gentlemen warriors both, they sip wine and bemoan this age of mechanized warfare and the mindless, dehumanizing nationalism gripping their beloved homeland.


Other officers, like Lieutenant Ito (Shidou Nakamura of "Fearless") have made it into a form of fundamentalism that ultimately proves poisonous to the Japanese cause.


"Letters from Iwo Jima" somewhat dispels the barbaric image of the Japanese soldier who history has taught us would commit suicide before being caught and would kill his fellow soldier rather than allow him to surrender. And though many Japanese did follow their emperor’s murderous and suicidal orders, "Letters" also shows the other humanistic side of the soldiers who longed to be home with their loved ones; who didn’t want to die rather than be captured; and who didn’t necessarily believe that this piece of rock was worth getting killed over. Not one to take sides, Eastwood doesn’t mince images in portraying the brutal side of the American soldiers either, particularly when they assassinate in cold blood two Japanese soldiers who had surrendered in good faith.

Unlike in "Flags," Eastwood spends more time exposing the back-stories of the soldiers and, more interestingly, the claustrophobic surroundings they were forced to live in during the battle. These young men were stationed in miles and miles of tunnels built within the mountain caves, and the viewer senses the dour and unsanitary living conditions these soldiers had to endure, and the psychological damage that such a confinement can create. In fact, while there were more battle scenes in "Flags," here most of the action takes place within the caves with focus centred almost exclusively on the characters' emotional and spiritual downfall.

Context can magnify the impact of art, and it seems obvious that "Letters from Iwo Jima" derives some of its current power from the fact that the United States has been embroiled for almost four years in a war in Iraq against a foe that is little understood by Americans.

Whatever profound differences distinguish the current conflict from World War II, a similarity is the reality that the enemy (on every side) is defined most forcefully in ways that are expedient to the political aims of the war's promoters--in ways that demonize the "otherness" of the foe.

Part of Eastwood's achievement in "Letters" is to erase this otherness. "Be proud to die for your country," a Japanese officer tells a soldier, just as his American counterpart might; "Always do what is right, because it is right," an American mom writes her soldier son in a letter read aloud in the film by an admiring Japanese translator. Another of Eastwood's achievements is to demonstrate that the ideas conveyed by these quotes can be contradictory, even if some people might consider such a notion subversive.

Such messages would be ineffective if "Letters from Iwo Jima" weren't a frequently exciting film and a model of classical movie storytelling and craftsmanship. Just as "Unforgiven" is a Western and "Million Dollar Baby" is a fight film, whatever ideas those Eastwood features might otherwise convey, "Iwo Jima" is thoroughly rewarding as a straight war movie. (The leisurely buildup to the carnage might frustrate those more interested in explosions than emotions, however; the sirens heralding the first U.S. attack don't sound until 45 minutes into the 142-minute film, and the invasion itself doesn't occur until 11 minutes later.)

Upon Tadamichi’s arrival to Iwo Jima, Kuribayashi orders an immediate halt to all the trench-digging at Iwo’s black-sand beaches much to the dismay of convention-bound officers overseeing their fortification. The beach will fall to the Americans no matter what, he argues; the battle for the island will have to be fought from under Iwo Jima. He orders his men to excavate miles of tunnels connecting the island's caves instead of relying on machine-gun bunkers on the beaches to stop the enemy.

By the time the massive U.S. armada is spotted on the horizon, more than 18 miles of tunnels have been dug under Iwo's crust and throughout Mount Suribachi, the volcanic mass anchoring the island (and atop which the American flag would soon be raised).
The American commanders figured it would take five days to capture Iwo Jima, a barren volcanic island, and make it a beachhead for their final attack on Japan.
The Japanese were badly outnumbered, their fleet was destroyed and fighter planes had been redeployed to defend the Mainland. Ammunition and medicine was in short supply, dysentery was raging, morale was low, and the Japanese troops were subsisting on a diet of worms, weed soup and foul water. Told that death defending the "sacred homeland" island of Iwo Jima is an honorable fate, the wry Saigo says of a fellow soldier's expiration: "Kashiwara died of honorable dysentery."


But the battle rages on for a remarkable six weeks, at a cost of 20,000 Japanese troops Only 136 surrendered to the Americans, who took over 7000 casualties. This Alamo-like last stand, masterminded by Kuribayashi, anticipated the tactics of the Viet Cong used against American soldiers in the Vietnam War.

Kuribayashi's unconventional strategy is derided especially by the more fanatical officers like Lt. Ito, though. Ito leads a mutiny after U.S. troops take Mount Suribachi--the famous raising of the flag is seen, strikingly, from a great distance. Ironically, Ito is one of the few taken prisoner by the end.

"Letters" has some of the same problems as "Flags," though, most notably a certain cool remove from its subjects, though it benefits from a much tighter focus and a higher quality of acting. Eastwood seems at times unwilling to really throw the viewer into the savagery of the fighting (Iwo Jima being one of the most vicious and drawn-out battles ever waged), almost as though he knows that by giving us more thrilling battle scenes, he may be shocking viewers, but he'll also be thrilling them. It appears that one of the great progenitors of American cinematic violence has finally just become sick of it all. He knows that however brave the soldiers, smart the strategy, or necessary the struggle, war is always by definition a bloody waste. The tragedy of this film is not just that the Japanese soldiers on Iwo Jima died for no reason, but how many of them died knowing it.

While it lacks the theoretical complexity and timely importance of "Flags,"
"Letters" is a significant development in the genre: No American war film, let alone one made during a time of war, ever embedded itself so deeply in the enemy camp. Even "Tora! Tora! Tora!" relied on Japanese filmmakers to tell the "other side" of the attack on Pearl Harbor.

Tellingly, Eastwood offers a very different version of a "Flags" scenario in which a young Marine is yanked off the battlefield and sadistically tortured to death. Here, a seriously wounded U.S. soldier is pulled into a cave and tenderly nursed by Lt. Colonel Nishi, and the act of mercy leads to the film's strongest moment. He tells the American boy (in one of two brief English-language segments) of a long-ago visit from Hollywood royalty Douglas Fairbanks and Mary Pickford. As Nishi translates aloud the dying soldier's final letter from home, the Japanese soldiers draw closer, each hanging on every word as if it had been written by his own mother.

In a magical instant, all that separates two nations at war disappears. This is sentimentality of the best kind, a touching display of male bonding amid terror and aching loneliness.

Even as it promotes understanding, the movie doesn't dilute reality. The harsh conditions of Japanese military service and the grim finality of certain Japanese traditions aren't denied. We see an officer beating two "unpatriotic" soldiers with a bamboo cane, and ritual suicide with grenades is depicted graphically.

Like its predecessor, "Letters" is staggeringly impressive as a technical achievement; one can only be amazed and inspired that Eastwood chose to tackle the most logistically complicated and ambitious movies of his career as a septuagenarian (he's now 76). Like "Flags," the movie is almost entirely leached of color; only the explosions of bombs and the sunburst of the Japanese flag add shades of red to the brown and gray.

Unlike "Flags," the movie was complicated by its language: "Letters" was shot in Japanese, with English subtitles translating the dialogue for U.S. viewers, which may discourage the casual U.S. viewer. "Letters" is a hit in Japan, though. Apparently, the language barrier that existed between Eastwood and his actors didn't hurt the film. In the case of "Letters," it would never have worked without the Japanese dialogue, the tone of the language being as essential to the characters' identity as their devotion to duty and resolve to fight to the death.

Directed by Eastwood without a false note, this is a powerful, brilliantly acted film that presents war as a necessary kind of hell in which there are no true victors. Superbly acted, unblinking and unhysterical, it looks beyond politics into the hearts and minds of the men we needed to call "the enemy," and lets us see ourselves.


Conceived after the first film was in production and made at a fraction of the cost, its director dismissed it in early interviews as "my little indulgence." "Letters" was supposed to be a tag-on coda to "Flags." If "Flags" is more complex in its ambitions and structure, the leaner, simpler "Letters" is even more emotionally devastating. Eastwood’s movie stands in the company of the greatest antiwar movies.